Save Water
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Water is fundamental to all life forms on earth.80% of the human body is water. And 71% of earth's surface is covered by water. Life will cease to exist if the water vanishes. Great thoughts. Lovely poem. Five stars
Save water, save energy.... Need of the hour. Looking forward to see more of this kind of message oriented poems.
Water is very much a necessity as you nicely described. Continue with your passion to write. The world can never have enough poetry. Thanks for sharing!
Water, air, sunlight, it is all life. Life never disappears, it moves around a bit. Potable, pee, ocean, mist, it's all perfect no? Peace SS
A thought provoking write without water the future is draught! .....well penned.
" .Water helps everything, " Tell a wood fire THAT! ! I wonder why the author puts a period at the start of each line. It is 'unique', but why do it, other than to be unique? bri :) i do not return to read any responses to my comments.
Many thanks for your comments. Really appreciate for you to bring this up. I am not sure about why I do it, may be its a style. I totally understand that you won't read my reply but these comments are necessary for me to look into in respect of improvements. Thats why I love this website! ! ! ! Respect SS
A very informative poem. Water water everywhere But flooding, Water water nowhere Will be flooding.... No drop to drink.
We take vital things for granted! But time has come to check and consume things in productive ways. Enough pollution and damages done! I love the poem. The poem tells us that water is sacred. Water gives the life. Well written. Thank you honorable poet.. ____+++10.
We definitely need to save water because without water there is no life. You wrote an excellent piece about how important water is in our lives. Awesome job Sarah.
Most live our every day with running water, how fortunate we are. To have been raised using rainwater for almost everything I now see a change of drought and water restrictions. Australian farmers are really suffering at present with summer and fires. This fast techno world seems to bring carelessness for the future. Thank You Sarah
I like how you say to help it so it can help us, we are all part of the one system of nature
Water is vital, and yet we pollute it. This poem joins Leonardo DiCaprio's campaign!
I love this poem so beautifully written. We need water to survive and we should be taking care of this planet for future generations to live and love. Great write!
An alarming condition has been pointed out by the honorable poet. Basic ingredients for life are air, water, heat and soil. But over population and human pollutions are destroying the environment. We have to be concerned on that. My most poems are on environment also. Very well written, ++10.
Sarah, your poem speaks to the hearts and minds of your fellow poets. You give us an important lesson on the necessity of water in our daily lives in poetry format. Great job and thanks for posting. : -)
save the water save the life save the world and make the world heaven!
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Sarah.
PS. I like the photograph added here. I regard this poem as my Birthday present, sans that you knew.TFS
What an interesting and thought-provoking poem. The message is well received by the reader. Thanks for sharing.