Friday, November 22, 2019

Water On Earth Save Water Comments

Rating: 4.7

Save Water

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sarah shahzad
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Tamara Beryl Latham 10 July 2023

What an interesting and thought-provoking poem. The message is well received by the reader. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 February 2021

Water is fundamental to all life forms on earth.80% of the human body is water. And 71% of earth's surface is covered by water. Life will cease to exist if the water vanishes. Great thoughts. Lovely poem. Five stars

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Queeny Gona 11 February 2020

Save water, save energy.... Need of the hour. Looking forward to see more of this kind of message oriented poems.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 December 2019

A timely warning through a nice poem.

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Sarah Shahzad 26 December 2019

Many thanks for your appreciation! ! !

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Bernard Snyder 23 December 2019

Water is very much a necessity as you nicely described. Continue with your passion to write. The world can never have enough poetry. Thanks for sharing!

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Sarah Shahzad 28 December 2019

thanks for nice feedback! :)

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Chuy Amante 23 December 2019

Water, air, sunlight, it is all life. Life never disappears, it moves around a bit. Potable, pee, ocean, mist, it's all perfect no? Peace SS

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Sarah Shahzad 28 December 2019

Thank you so much for your kind words... Bless and love :)

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Tom Allport 22 December 2019

A thought provoking write without water the future is draught! .....well penned.

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Bri Edwards 21 December 2019

" .Water helps everything, " Tell a wood fire THAT! ! I wonder why the author puts a period at the start of each line. It is 'unique', but why do it, other than to be unique? bri :) i do not return to read any responses to my comments.

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Sarah Shahzad 26 December 2019

Many thanks for your comments. Really appreciate for you to bring this up. I am not sure about why I do it, may be its a style. I totally understand that you won't read my reply but these comments are necessary for me to look into in respect of improvements. Thats why I love this website! ! ! ! Respect SS

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 20 December 2019

A very informative poem. Water water everywhere But flooding, Water water nowhere Will be flooding.... No drop to drink.

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Chan Mongol 19 December 2019

We take vital things for granted! But time has come to check and consume things in productive ways. Enough pollution and damages done! I love the poem. The poem tells us that water is sacred. Water gives the life. Well written. Thank you honorable poet.. ____+++10.

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Rosie Bourget 16 December 2019

We definitely need to save water because without water there is no life. You wrote an excellent piece about how important water is in our lives. Awesome job Sarah.

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Sarah Shahzad 16 December 2019

Thanks for the kind visit..

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Lyn Paul 13 December 2019

Most live our every day with running water, how fortunate we are. To have been raised using rainwater for almost everything I now see a change of drought and water restrictions. Australian farmers are really suffering at present with summer and fires. This fast techno world seems to bring carelessness for the future. Thank You Sarah

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Carl Roussell 13 December 2019

I like how you say to help it so it can help us, we are all part of the one system of nature

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Mihaela Pirjol 12 December 2019

Water is vital, and yet we pollute it. This poem joins Leonardo DiCaprio's campaign!

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

Thank you my poetic friend..

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Hazel Durham 11 December 2019

I love this poem so beautifully written. We need water to survive and we should be taking care of this planet for future generations to live and love. Great write!

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

I am glad you like it..

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

I am glad you like it.. :)

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Chan Mongol 11 December 2019

An alarming condition has been pointed out by the honorable poet. Basic ingredients for life are air, water, heat and soil. But over population and human pollutions are destroying the environment. We have to be concerned on that. My most poems are on environment also. Very well written, ++10.

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

Thank you so much for your kind words... Bless and love

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Tamara Beryl Latham 10 December 2019

Sarah, your poem speaks to the hearts and minds of your fellow poets. You give us an important lesson on the necessity of water in our daily lives in poetry format. Great job and thanks for posting. : -)

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Sarah Shahzad 12 December 2019

Thank you for taking the time to read it.. love

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 December 2019

save the water save the life save the world and make the world heaven!

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Sarah Shahzad 10 December 2019

that's all true just you say :) thank you..

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Sarah.

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Sarah Shahzad 10 December 2019

Thank you for taking the time to read it..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 December 2019

PS. I like the photograph added here. I regard this poem as my Birthday present, sans that you knew.TFS

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