Water Of Life Comments

Both the physical and the metaphysical aspects are the mainstreams to dive deep into the essence of being into togetherness now and beyond the boundary of mundane life. Noteworthy are the lines: A process goes life-long, maybe beyond it. Glistening in the immortality of light, .

Sensual poem, nicely written, Struggle of a lover who is In deep sea of love......................Loved it.10++++

A really beautiful poem with very imaginative imagery.. I loved your use of water as a representative for lovers - being made of the same element yet perhaps different as water(s) are - somewhere it contains too much salt, somewhere it contains no salt whatsoever.. The ending with love sustaining all things and finally going down like the sun goes down at the horizon is a beautiful image.. A brilliant read.. Thanks for sharing :)

great poem, your thoughts are amazing, well-penned, hanks for sharing.

Great write on a lifelong bond Thanks-10