Monday, February 10, 2014

Water Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

water flowing
in mountains streams creeks rivers
water trickling
racing to fill ponds lakes oceans
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Terence George Craddock
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Indira Renganathan 21 February 2024

An elaborate write on water and its importance. Indeed earth is a water planet that without water there will be no life and no survival of earthlings. Very educative write.Liked

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M. Asim Nehal 03 February 2024

We all are made of water and have a part in us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 May 2023

A beautiful poem but its horrible when we face situations like, water, water everywhere and not a drop to drink'.. Top score for this excellent poem.

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Denis Mair 31 March 2023

Sorry that my clumsy finger did not correctly execute the 5-star vote this poem deserves.

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Terence Craddock 11 April 2023

I think a love an appreciation of nature and beauty, the joy found in reading any good literature, are their own rewards. All beauty is a gift not often appreciated enough. Best Regards sincerely Terence.

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I wrote the poem 'Creating Gift Time Memories', inspired by the gift of a clumsy finger comment on my poem 'Water Of Life', by the poet Denis Mair and dedicated to Denis Mair.

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Denis Mair 31 March 2023

That should have been a Poem of the Day. Sorry to have missed it. Indeed water is exquisitely tied up with everything life is about, and to have a watery voice is no small accomplishment.

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Terence Craddock 11 April 2023

Water continues to be a dominant recurring theme, with probably twenty poems starting with water, a few starting with waves, and many references to water. Pure clean water in nature is inspiring and soul lifting; polluted waste water in landscapes painful to see.

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Aqua Flower 07 November 2020

Water is life...and no living organisms can do without it! Wonderful flow to this.

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L Milton Hankins 16 October 2020

This message needs to circulate around the globe! I love the line " without water we could not even cry." Good writing!

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2020

water mist breath allowing myriad life possibilities water small droplets sowing web of life potential diverse forms this is a meditation dear poet on water and all that is done with water how we are dependent on water for life. very good poem dear poet Terence George. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2020

without water there would be no magnificient earth life swarms....so true.Much impressive and touching. The importance of water is well executed by you in different directions. Really without water Earth will not be survived. Great work. Five stars.

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Soran M. H 18 September 2020

water flowing... very common and simple image we all see it, but not every one can write an amazing details about the secret behind water such as our beloved poet did it here in the style of his fine poetic text, thanks for sharing your great feeling with us

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Soran M. H 18 September 2020

blood energies water needed by dependent earth life cycles

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 September 2020

Wow awesome on the scientific importance of water to our make up and life. I have a similar title poem about water movement. Kudos.

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 13 February 2020

water is truly life. really good

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

Wow excellent. What is the secret To writing such a lovely poem.

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Dominic Windram 03 October 2019

Very evocative poem Terence...it was a pleasure to read!

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A B Faniki 11 August 2019

No one could hardly disagree with you water is indeed life n so much more.A facinating poem. Cheers

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Luz Hanaii 01 February 2019

Yes, water is so important to life, nice poem. Hope this comment will go through. My last comments didn't post?

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Britte Ninad 31 May 2018

to survive water without elixir of life water earth will not be alive great lines- 10+++

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alan brown 09 April 2018

enjoyed reading your poem Terence, thank you Alan

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Denis Mair 05 March 2017

Your song is informed by fluidity of water. By following water we know ourselves to be interwoven with the life of Gaia. Water belongs to the extended body of cosmic man, because it is a nexus for the cosmic blueprint of life. Water outside of the human body is part of life, just as water inside the body is, because circulation marries inside to outside. All the components of life interact in the medium of water. Animate vs. inanimate is an artificial distinction when it comes to water. The constant jostling of water molecules nudges amino acids so they fit into their templates and join as chains. Water is the shepherd of lipids, repelling them so that they join as membranes. Water lets ions form gradients across membranes, then restores equilibrium in electrolytic pulses. Water suspends colloids at the edges of their phase boundary, so they are constantly forming and reforming. Water needs a hump of caloric energy to evaporate; it needs a hump of caloric energy to boil. It stores heat and transmits heat, but as ice it insulates. It has high surface tension but zero viscosity. There is no end of secret things that water does. It is simple in the sense that it is elemental, yet it gives itself to life in a multitude of ways. There is nothing random about the way water is.

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Terence Craddock 11 April 2023

There is a depth of knowledge and appreciation for water in this detailed comment, impossible on PH now. I find it strange this poem got so much attention when studies like 'Water Wonder Fills Soul In Shifting Shades' were often missed.

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