Water Mania Comments

very nice poem, a sort of event faced by one and all

Nice depiction of cloud bursting rain drowning the whole place including your well! What next? nobody knows! Keep it up!

This may happen one day. There is something called pralaya in ancient Indian epics. Perhaps, what you penned points at that. Pralaya is also dissolution of the created universe. Good write. keep it up.

The change of weather depicted masterfully! Great poem, thanks for the invitation!

AT the end of the poem you came dramatically to the question what will happen of me when natural calamities so destroy everything we have and we are about to sink into the depths of........ very nice poem. your short sentences adds to the seriousness of the subject. tony