Water Lily I Met At Work Comments

Ah... nothing like watching or being watched..lol Loved it!

Chris (Not Cretan or whatever other enigma you've chosen) - This weaving of text and subtext, is amazing and your release was perfect. If you had willed it, she would have looked back! Best wishes - Cheryl

Oh, what a brilliant ending. Yeh, it's good to be watched. :) t x

I enjoyed reading this poem. It's complex, witty, says alot. Hope you enjoy work.

I really enjoyed this Chris and I love the way you've laid it out, making every single word count, and each sentence take on different meaning depending on how you read it. Top notch old chap (I have no idea why I just said that) Hugs Anna xxx

I'll drink to her and her second cousin.