'Water Landing' Sounds Suspicious... Comments

loved the title, and some great lines in here, like ' it kills me to see my own demise '. with overall strong emotional impact. -chuck

Again, proving why you're majoring in English.. a poem with such pace and intensity that breathes so fully - your 'ledge' is definitely your creative writing. I actually love your descriptive, confident writing style. Somebody to look up to. Thanks again, Mark.x