Saturday, April 1, 2017

Water Flows Into A Garden Comments

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At Kent State the flea-market-cruising roommate girls
Discovered the retro charm of 1930's jackets
Square-shouldered seriousness dissolved in giggles
Adornment rituals for young female bonding
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Denis Mair
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Laurie van der Hart 30 March 2019

A fascinating reflection on, amongst other things, your sister’s gardening rituals and antics. I see the connection with my poem - She is over them, orchestrating their advent in timed explosion. Love the lines “Potting and pruning, rampaging among the biomass...”

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Bharati Nayak 08 November 2018

I am reading this poem for the second time.Now I can relate to this poem and properly understand its meaning. A wonderful poem about your sister Heidi Mair, who has a passion for gardening as well as Yoga and 'Ayurveda', .I have seen her beautiful garden photos.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 April 2017

Memories flow wonderful and sister is ever affectionate. This is very interesting sharing done really.10

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