Water Falls Comments
'I need it cold' (how cold) , so cold that i can't feel my neck caps! ! ! ,
I need it so cold i forget this touch of a feeling.
Like the tracks of a huskie sparkling of crystal, clear so clear of a mountain i need it cold! ! ! ,
Like hand of a shuttle, settle free, empty barrels, like the softest place on earth.... of dropp of rain on the back of the porch....
...
Read full text
I like this poem. I think sometimes we forget to appreciate the cold. honey I'm home suggests a place where it is warm. With the cold, we appreciate the warmth! Thanks for poem!
Refreshing is water and refreshing is poetry...
Enjoyed this one, Louis. There's no way though that I would like it cold! I prefer the heat of an Arizona sun, over 100 degrees is good for me. You do make the cold sound beautiful though - Like the tracks of a Huskie sparkling of crystal, clear so clear of a mountain I need it cold! ! ! Very good poem, Louis. Thank you, RoseAnn
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/30/2025 11:06:42 PM # 1.0.0
The sensation of temperture. The contrast was well worked. RAB