Wednesday, February 25, 2009

Water, Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Vignettes of scenes from my own way
Flicker past in nonsensical parade
From yesterday to birthday cakes and Christmas Trees
The reality keeps filling
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Pablo Cruise
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Ben Gieske 12 March 2009

I can sense the struggle. You give us something to think about and supply our own experiences to yours which I like to do.

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Salu Salu 08 March 2009

vividly narrating in a smooth pace whie at larrge intricate and intriguing as it develops........so artistic in its weaving..........rgrds/salu

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Kranthi Pothineni 07 March 2009

Well written...a very very good flow...very well expressed...Fabulous work

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