Sunday, June 26, 2011

Water Cycle Comments

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Raindrops pool in azure skies
Yellow boots now flying through
Sparkling drops lift off, take flight
To come to rest on emerald leaves
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Elizabeth Shield
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Adeline Foster 14 November 2015

Your Poem about the Water Cycle was very good and easy to read. I thought it was going to be about Ecclesiastes 1: verses 6 & 7 and then verse 9 bemoans the monotony of it all. There was no monotony in you poem I enjoyed it. Read mine - Frost Flowers - Adeline

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