'Flowing cool delightful
Filled with energy and beautiful creatures
Bending sparkling filed with life'
this is good, filed should be filled, I do this sometimes, shows promise; talent, therefore I ask, is it what you wanted to say, or do you want to develop or change it a little, the differences are depths :)
good luck and power to your pen
i chose filed to be different from filled because it shows that the water has all types if life in it that's why i used filed instead of filled so i wouldn't repeat myself and confuse others.
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'Flowing cool delightful Filled with energy and beautiful creatures Bending sparkling filed with life' this is good, filed should be filled, I do this sometimes, shows promise; talent, therefore I ask, is it what you wanted to say, or do you want to develop or change it a little, the differences are depths :) good luck and power to your pen
i chose filed to be different from filled because it shows that the water has all types if life in it that's why i used filed instead of filled so i wouldn't repeat myself and confuse others.