Friday, November 14, 2014

Water (Children's Day Special) Comments

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Drink water
Which is pure
It is healthy
That is sure.
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Tribhawan Kaul
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Shahzia Batool 28 May 2015

A very good work Bhajaan, and very important too, though the target readership should be the elders of 5-7 years kids who can guide them...here poetry becomes a service too...keep writing good and stay blessed!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2014

Excellent poem for children literature on water. Simple and beautiful really shared on children's day. Very nice job done. More valuable at all time really.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 November 2014

very good advice, but water business is too big, which the governments of poor nations don't know. they want someone to teach them...This message may be classified as an unsuitable message, which I hardly mind.. Thank you Tribhawan Kaul//This is such a nice poem which I enjoyed...

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