Wednesday, February 22, 2006

Water Break Comments

Rating: 4.3

well, maybe
another wrenching story -
her plumber delivered
her baby boy
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Chuck Audette
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Poetry Hound 23 February 2006

Very clever and amusing, Chuck. I felt 'drained' after reading it. Har har.

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Esther Leclerc 22 February 2006

Wonder if he needed WD-40 to loosen the little nut? (Weak, I admit, but I couldn't resist!) Fun one, Chuck!

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Rusty Daily 22 February 2006

Excellent Charles. loved the word play

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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