Friday, September 28, 2012

Water Birth.....21 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Squirming body pulsating pushing contracting
Doused
Lukewarm water shares space with beads of sweat
Smiles grimace through drips
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Anita Sehgal 03 October 2012

''''Barely a tear from that glorious Infant face And all the pain is gone Only joy remains....'''' such beautiful expression... have really enjoyed reading your poems.. this one particularly.

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Asif Andalib 28 September 2012

A nice description of conflict in conjugal life and how we find consolation and peace in our children. Nice poem

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Water is a significant proportion of the human body constituent and water here is symbolic of life as it gives birth what the poem delineates.I hope the mini princess is ok with you.Wonderful poetry hereby.

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Danny Draper 28 September 2012

A tumult of pain and emotion, history personal each one different and vowed to be the last, lovely mix of raw anguish and serene adoration and maddened regret. Great stuff.

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