Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Water Ballet Comments

Rating: ★0.0

The line sailed through the air in reconnaissance
and somewhat suspended above the noise of silence
depositing its' offering only to be declined
Rejection, again, and again, and again
...
Read full text

Jake Deeds
Rejection
COMMENTS
Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

A marvellous piece of poetry….a smart attempt and extraordinary effort, thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Jim Hogg 25 February 2012

But the poem didn't get away! .. Reads like a metaphor for all those things that we can't quite capture...but catch a tantalising glimpse of.. ah life...

1 0 Reply
Load More...
Jake Deeds

Jake Deeds

Arkansas
Jake Deeds
Jake Deeds
Arkansas
Poet's Page Poems More
Close Activity Quotes Following Followers Statistics My Profile Add New Poem Add New Quote
Poemhunter.com
 Best Poems Best Member Poems Best Classical Poems New Poems New Poets Best Member Poets Best Classical Poets Explore Poems Explore Poets Poem Of The Day
Poems About
 Love Poems Baby Poems Death Poems Sad Poems Birthday Poems Wedding Poems Nature Poems Sorry Poems Hero Poems Poetry E-Books
Best Poets
 Robert Frost Maya Angelou William Shakespeare Pablo Neruda Langston Hughes Emiliy Dickinson Shel Silverstein William Blake Rabindranath Tagore William Wordsworth
Best Poems
 Phenomenal Woman Still I Rise The Road Not Taken If You Forget Me Dreams Annabel Lee Caged Bird If Fire And Ice On The Death Of The Beloved
Poem Hunter App Store
PoemHunter Facebook PoemHunter Twitter PoemHunter Instagram
About Us Copyright notice Cookie Policy Privacy Statement Contact Us Help Report Error Is Poem Hunter a legit site? Is Poem Hunter safe? Comunity Rules Privacy Policy Legal Terms Of Use

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

7/30/2025 9:01:26 AM # 1.0.0

Close
Error Success