Monday, November 21, 2022

Water Ball Comments

Rating: 5.0

When he comes home drunk
Inebriation sways him funnily.

Routine clumsy walk and stumble, all utterances are
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Konalli Rajeev Naik
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Konalli Rajeev Naik 21 November 2022

Thanks for your appreciation David.

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David Wood 21 November 2022

I've lived near a bar for 11 years and never been in it, but I see the effects on the people who do. A well penned poem.

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