Thursday, November 27, 2008

*water Baby. Comments

Rating: 2.8

Take me to the place my body seeks,
In a swirl of water: torrents, rains and streams,
Place me among the wet sands absorbing my tears,
And once again I shall be allowed to breathe.
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Melissa Coventry
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James Fieldhouse 28 November 2008

Brilliant...wow...you have really captured the feeling of the place where the land meets the crashing waves....

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Melissa Coventry 28 November 2008

Rather... Thee Hamster not the Hamster...

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Lauren Watkins 27 November 2008

I love this Melli... I'm rather attached to the water too, even though I also have a wonderfully inate fear of it! The land looks so parched, I was out on the bike with Dad the other day and I couldnt believe how dry it was. This will be another long summer for this land of ours. Xx Hammy

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