A drop of water reflects the world clear
A grain of sand counts the sadness men bear.
Can a grain of sand melt a drop of water?
...
Read full text
Very interesting concept, I like how you think. Maybe try expanding your thoughts a little more, giving more substance. Your ideas are good. Thank you for sharing.
'Can a grain of sand melt a drop of water? A drop of water can not hold the entire tear' - these two lines have deep meaning. Loved these lines! Also loved the way poet Roseann Shawiak encouraged you through her comment.