Friday, December 1, 2006

Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

I live on top of skeletons
always flying from oceans
with closed eyes.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Ivan Donn Carswell 07 December 2006

I think I understand the liquid life analogy. Somehow though, I feel the poem isn't quite complete...

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