Tuesday, July 29, 2008

Water Comments

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You cool my nerves when my lips touch you,
You relax my senses when you pour over me,
You’re my savior, you’re my life,
Without you, oh dear water!
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shruti modi
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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

the lovely sky juice... my eyes sail in your oceans... amazing imagery it quenches highest of the thirsts of life's essence!

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Susan Jarvis 14 August 2008

I am now viewing water in a new light - 'lovely sky juice' is an image that fills my heart. A wonderful accolade to life's sustenance. S :)

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Stacey Watts 13 August 2008

Very talented use of something so needful that we take for granted, I enjoyed reading.

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