Thursday, January 2, 2003

Water Comments

Rating: 4.2

Water still, water deep, how many secrets do you keep?
We look upon your surface calm, and feel the peace that is a balm.
Now the gentle stream runs faster, racing swiftly swiftly ---
Over boundless cataracts. Water -- share your energy with me.
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Davide Fontani 09 March 2025

Hi, my name is Davide, I'

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Albert Timper 25 February 2014

Your poem makes one think. I really like the first line as it made me yearn for answers.. Water still, Water deep, How many secrets do you keep? Your name for one, Tributaries flowing, Harts, Riet, Vaal joining;

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Adelaide Rhead

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