Water, you flow
with one oxygen two hydrogen
Up, to the peak of my thoughts, the tip
of my tongue, you flow, for the sake of flow,
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Had I have any joy, let my joy be small. Had I have any sorrow, let my sorrow be short. had I learn any, let my lesson be simple. wishes that are so fine and leads to positive attitude.
Reading this poem inspired me to write PALACE OF WATER, but my poem is ponderous and clogged with facts. You put lots of depth into the simple image of a floating peony petal. Your poem has force and momentum...an enlivening read.
Denis, your poem is thoughts provoking. Very appreciated your comments.