Thursday, September 5, 2013

Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

My world is water
two beads of water form my eyes
an eye of water is my heart
a constant wave of salty motion is my tongue
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Spellshifter Poetry
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Susan Lacovara 03 June 2014

I loved being drenched in the downpour of your poem. Very creative and full of sprinkled imagery. PEACE

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Gajanan Mishra 05 September 2013

rainy day makes me whole, wonderful write, thanks.

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