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Very fine lines. Written as if words have just come out of your heart.
the selfish strife of human wants well depicted with the metaphor of water...................quiet punching of truth
A beautiful exposition of an issue. If you like to live a peaceful life in the society, there should be peaceful coexistence. Both have to leave a little and at the same time have to share also for benefit of both. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful write, with understanding and compromise we can live together in a fair and peaceful society!
Often neighbours can have similar issues propping up among them.....especially on basic necessities like water! With a little adjustment and tolerance, such disputes and the resultant ill will can be amicably settled! A beautiful poem on the problems faced in practical life! |
I like the storyline, but I have a feeling English is not your first language so you may read even better in another.
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7/29/2025 8:34:49 PM # 1.0.0
Honestly like friends and good neighbours. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.