Sunday, July 9, 2006

Water Comments

Rating: 3.3

You sway
Like my emotions
You glitter
Into my eyes
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Diana Poems
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Smrui Ranjan Mohanty 05 August 2019

Beautiful correlation between water and life. Wonderful ink

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Rajesh Thankappan 24 January 2015

But within you There is beauty There is life Water is the elixir of life and this aspect you have very nicely brought out in this beautiful poem.10/10 Since the current topic on PH is on ‘ Peace, ’ I invite you to read my poem entitled ‘ A Nice Wise Guy, ’ on PH

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Krishna Dasani 15 July 2006

this is soooo lovely.. the analogy which i made out, out of this was as in you were refering to a loved one as water.. anyways poems have no one meaning.. so i culled out mine.. anyway, thanks for a wonderful read.. regards, krishna

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Brian Dorn 14 July 2006

Diana, there is nothing shallow about this poem... rather, a deep journey into the essence of water. Brilliantly done! ! Brian

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How true, water is the sustainer of all life.

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