You sway
Like my emotions
You glitter
Into my eyes
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But within you There is beauty There is life Water is the elixir of life and this aspect you have very nicely brought out in this beautiful poem.10/10 Since the current topic on PH is on ‘ Peace, ’ I invite you to read my poem entitled ‘ A Nice Wise Guy, ’ on PH
this is soooo lovely.. the analogy which i made out, out of this was as in you were refering to a loved one as water.. anyways poems have no one meaning.. so i culled out mine.. anyway, thanks for a wonderful read.. regards, krishna
Diana, there is nothing shallow about this poem... rather, a deep journey into the essence of water. Brilliantly done! ! Brian
How true, water is the sustainer of all life.
Beautiful correlation between water and life. Wonderful ink