Friday, August 23, 2013

Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

The gushing, whirring, crashing
Of white and blue upon blue,
Swirling like my own brain's activity.
Thoughts after thoughts in chaotic electricity
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Vera Sidhwa
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Mohabeer Beeharry 24 August 2013

Whatever it is, it is beautiful, if your imagination could add to reality. God always leaves an empty space for man to fill., to exercise his choice. Short but sweet. Well done. Mohabeer Beeharry

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