Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Watchman, What Of The Night? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will not hold my peace...
And let some man determine a life for my kids,
The very reason I want to speak.
I've watched the world do as it pleases,
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kyvin Nash
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Gary James Smith 15 December 2018

Amen...hope is rising!

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Kyvin Nash 23 January 2019

Indeed, Mr Smith... Thank you!

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2018

Witty reflection set aside for sober reflection. A well conceived and elegantly penned piece of poetry, well articulated with conviction. Thanks for sharing Kyvin.

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Kyvin Nash 16 November 2018

Thanks for a reflective comment, very positive and uplifting, I'm great full Mr Chinedu Dike.

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Rod Mendieta 22 August 2017

Liked this one very much. Perhaps you meant 'as men FALL asleep'. Minor point but it deserves the polishing up.

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Kyvin Nash 28 August 2017

Thanks a lot Rod, yes will edit! ! !

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