Watching You Fall Comments

easier said than done! :)

So very hard to watch a loved one fall....expressed perfectly here....with love. Excellent write, Lyn....and so strongly felt. Thank you....

so warm and compelling write. so hard to watch one fall. nice

I can feel the frustration you feel and the desire to help. A strong poem of hope Lyn.

The poem is Lyn Paul brand... so tender...the feeling heart and the open door... a selfless offer till the final upper-case PLEASE....so earnest and humane! ! ! Nice Lyn! ! !

Oh Lyn....this is written so well. A heart wrenching piece....I love your work. Love Roobs xxx

touched................... very nice.......... i invite you read and comment on my poems.

touched................... very nice.......... i invite you read and comment on my poems.