Sunday, February 17, 2008

Watching You Die... Comments

Rating: 4.8

I walked in and I called your name,
I knew the score; we both knew the game.
I poured you some rum, it was one of your ways.
Small token to comfort you in your final days.
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Daniel Adams
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Ann Beard 17 February 2008

Hi Daniel, Lovely poem, well described. I know how you felt.

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May Valentina 17 February 2008

Wow, Daniel this poem is beautiful, I love the words you used they made the poem so much better. Good write. Mariana

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Daniel Adams

Daniel Adams

Newcastle Upon Tyne - England.
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