Saturday, March 20, 2010

Watching Through The Snow Comments

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I had a dream once of not so long ago
Of a girl standing there in the middle of the snow
White flakes covered every corner of my view
But I always found her, as if she was someone I knew
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Nathan Martin 20 March 2010

im not going to say anything really amazing or fancy, except that i think you are talented keep it up. nate

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Precious Raphael.m. 20 March 2010

By eyes we reach to correct and make right somewhat vision on the outside forever only to recognise it was our reflection on ripples by our now grotesque shadow fading away-to late...Luvly poem

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Rehana Nazli 20 March 2010

Very powerful story of self. I really enjoyed reading this flawless narrative. 5 stars *****

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