Sunday, January 22, 2006

Watching The Sky Comments

Rating: 4.8

I reach for the end of day
orange, pink, lavender, gray
and watch it slide out of my
fingers as the sun dips behind
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Lady Blue
COMMENTS
Hugh Cobb 23 January 2006

A lovely and sensual poem which speaks to the aesthetic sense. The inquiry in verse 2 is lovely and open: child-like not childish. Good write. All the best, HDC

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Ernestine Northover 23 January 2006

Lovely one Rita, beautifully constructed and so meaningful, Loved it a lot. Love Ernestine XXX

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Peter Lebuhn 22 January 2006

I like the Imagery here Lady Blue I have one Nature (In all her Flavour) I think you will like Peter

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