Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Watching The Cuckold Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slouching in the corner to make myself less
I watched in the dim room.
My bed, empty of my presence,
Filled more wholely by her student.
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Derrick Thompson
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Saint Cynosure 19 November 2013

I agree with Kanav you are very good at crafting words into pictures in mens minds and that being said give the world more my friend...

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Kanav Justa 07 November 2013

you have a unique way of writnig, , , poems like these are not seen much here at ph, , , loved it so much, , , you should write more

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