Sitting in the balcony
I watch the rose bud
Swaying in the breeze
Waiting to open up
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Beautiful poem, A smiler, so well written and such great pleasure to read, Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! CONGRATULATIONS dear Poet Tiku Sir.5 Stars Full Vote! In a Wonderous way you watch the rose bud In the eve when sun Is down I find it dried And fallen to the ground. Never in my thoughts that the rose is for One DAY only!
I watch it smiling in The air with bees and Butterflies flitting around In the eve when sun Is down I find it dried And fallen to the ground /// beautifully depicted the smiling bud in the air, sunlight; bud smiles when the butterflies are flying, when the bees are buzzing, when the lovers are coming to smell it; beautiful poem shared; congrats for being selected this poem as POD and from me 5********
Tiku, salutations to you good sir and great kudos as well bestowed for your uplifting poem of soothing calm and beauty, deservedly chosen as today's Member Poem of the Day. I wish you well and may God Bless and Keep you and the loved ones around you. Congratulations again and thank you kindly Take care and enjoy life and poetry and all the good they have to offer.
I watch the first ray Of sun appear in the East and fall on the bud And its petals open up Releasing sweet scents. What a fine description of nature. your simple language conveys it wonderfully well. tony
The fate of shining flowers Same to the egoistic beings. Congrats Tiku for being selected as a POD
A great nature poem unfolding the life cycle of a beautiful rose flower. Heartiest congrats on poem of the day.
Congrats! s beautiful poem, a well deserved selection as member's poem.
Opening the petals of a bud is much awaited in anxious moments. At last the bud is in full bloom filling the heart to the brim. But the delight is replaced by deep pain when it is seen wilted and withered. Congrats dear AKP
The life cycle of a flower as the poet watches it bloom from the bud, blossom in the garden and ultimately perish in the soil. A keen observation manifested in the poem. Heartiest congratulations on your poem’s selection as the ‘Member Poem of the Day’!
Happiness and gloom - -life incorporates both- A lovely poem, thanks for sharing
The green turning colored Right under the orange hued Azure sky recieving the new bud Into world of flowers held So beautifully you have made bud morph into flower awesome... congratulations for being chosen as POD.
Such is the cycle of life. Very nice imagery. Congrats on poem of the day!
A well conveyed poem... Truly delightful and wonderful....5 stars.... Bernard
A fabulous poem! I am delighted to find this wonderful poem being displayed today on the home page as the poem of the Day! Many congratulations! !
The budding of a beautiful rose flower. ⚘ Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A beautifully crafted poem with compelling imagery. An astute observation on the interaction between a flower bud and the forces of nature. A great painting of the many wonders of nature! Congratulations for a truly deserved accolade.
Life is short. Sharing love and happiness to the most is the essense of life. Symbolic write