Friday, September 26, 2014

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Our duty is to show kindness on them,
By action they are begging in mass defame.
They don't know reason they are begging,
Moving places they are falling in ragging. [1]
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 10 December 2018

This poem points to the discrepancy in society; the consequence of a system unethically founded.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 August 2018

An ever so heart felt poem, for those in need of our prayers... and the compassion God has for all... Working through all in spirit... Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Valsa George 28 November 2014

Some times the disparity between man and man perplexes us! While one is born into the lap of luxury, another is born in the nadir of poverty! While some are rulers, others are beggars! But it is not our doing.... to a great extent, it is God's will! So we should be compassionate to the poor! Great thoughts!

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Carol Anne Bundy 17 November 2014

A very beautiful poem that speaks to the oneness of us all. Very beautiful idea, beautifully said.

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Roseann Shawiak 08 November 2014

This poem is a reflection of your kind and compassionate being Kumarmani. Your realization that even beggars are part of the action on this earth, they have their parts to play, is gently and kindly touched upon. A very thoughtful and endearing poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 08 November 2014

This poem is a reflection of your kind and compassionate being Kumarmani. Your realization that even beggars are part of the action on this earth, they have their parts to play, is gently and kindly touched upon. A very thoughtful and endearing poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Salini Nair 07 October 2014

Wonder is the law of action in this Earth, One is ruler; one is beggar of same time birth......................... great poem....

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Alice Cordy 01 October 2014

Extremely touching poem, worth reading over and over again.

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Lyn Paul 29 September 2014

Not enough food on the table for too many yet waste in other parts of the world just accepted. Thank You for your words

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 September 2014

A touching one indeed beautifully crafted......Kumarmani........on lives of beggars we call them but they are part of our nation, part of our this world and part of our life............ very nice

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Vajkard Osvald 27 September 2014

I very mcuh enoy your work, very beautiful

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2014

I read this poem again and again and came across my thought if we are bewildered. Thanks for share.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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