Thursday, September 22, 2011

Watching Her Sleep Comments

Rating: 3.0

He loves to watch her sleep.
Likes to hear her breathe in
And out; see her breasts rise
And fall like sleeping giants.
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Terry Collett
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Dave Walker 22 September 2011

Like it. He might as well of woke her up. Cos when his boss finds out he's going to get sacked anyway. Good write.

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Hans Vr 22 September 2011

Watching her sleep. Very poetic. Would be still nicer without the last stanza

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