Watching Helplessly Comments

It's really a wonderful poem sir... nicely composed!

Unbearable pain and passion, Hope to succeed one day in mission, 10

My eyes stopped and took me by surprise, Alighted from winged plane to rise, I wondered and thought step so wise, One should come here and improvise,

have no answer at present, I resist and strongly resent, Unbearable pain and passion.........10

I watch my beloved earth with tearful gesture, How she looks upward with barren pasture?

Surrounded by poisonous gas and hot wind, Not able to decide or how to apply mind? Something to do and ways to find, Not show discomfort and look so kind, ................10

watch my beloved earth with tearful gesture, How she looks upward with barren pasture? .......10

Vapours and clouds have enough strength, Stretching long with very good length,

Watching helplessly thousands of miles above, Nothing on hand to show or my love to prove? .........10

Something to do and ways to find, Not show discomfort and look so kind, .............so intense love....10

Watching helplessly thousands of miles above, Nothing on hand to show or my love to prove? .....10

I watch my beloved earth with tearful gesture, How she looks upward with barren pasture? ....10

Wait! I am coming with full force, No room will be left there for any remorse, ....10

Watching helplessly thousands of miles above, Nothing on hand to show or my love to prove

Surrounded by poisonous gas and hot wind, Not able to decide or how to apply mind? ....10

Surrounded by poisonous gas and hot wind, Not able to decide or how to apply mind? ....10

Vapours and clouds have enough strength, Stretching long with very good length, ....10

watch my beloved earth with tearful gesture, How she looks upward with barren pasture? ......10

Surrounded by poisonous gas and hot wind, Not able to decide or how to apply mind? ....10

You did not move but remain among Journey was hard and very very long....10