Friday, May 12, 2017

Watching - Depression Comments

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Standing on the sidelines,
watching helplessly as the shining light
within you fades.
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Elaine Macfarlane
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Antonio Williams 13 May 2017

A great piece.. there is hope of victory even when the ghosts come rasping.

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Rajnish Manga 12 May 2017

The poet has a good grasp of this psychological state known as depression and has give it a nice treatment. He has expressed the hope that the condition is fully curable. Thanks. the shining light.... within you fades. A bleakness and darkness.... invades your soul

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Elaine Macfarlane

Elaine Macfarlane

East Kilbride, Scotland
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