! ! ! ! ! Watching A Child Grow! ! ! ! ! Comments

Superb write here...sways the reader here away to imaginations..

A keen eye for detail, some wonderful comparisons and a beautifully poetic expression make this write stand out.

Touchy! and very neat and clean! A fine artwork indeed! Mamtaji, your mamtaful obsevation and creative composition always touch me! I can see your lovely mind! 10++++

Mamta, lovely word pictures of growth of child, an enjoyable read. Watching, rearing, noticing, teaching and love all are necessary when we raise a child, I can see you noticed very well with lots of care! Love Bob

Picture perfect. touching, wonderful imagery

Sandra sait it right...yes; beautiful poem pictures...bringing up sweet a child...10

Very touching, Mamta. You have painted some beautiful poem pictures here. Love, SandraX

dear mamtaji, in malayalam there is a saying: the very life of a man ends on the very day of his marriage! sounds funny..isn't it? loved your poem...who other can write this poem except a passionate mother like you...thanks mamtaji......

You've spoken about the good growing of a child...nice and pleasing to read...but in the practical world, be it girl or boy, when they go bad beyond anybody's control.only the mother is blamed for their wrong conduct totally.. is it not? ....anyway a good theme10+++++++

that was a watch along with nature..a lovely poem indeed

The beautiful poetic description of the various stages of life - reminded me of Shakespeare's lines, where the last stage is without teeth, hair, vision ......and 'sans everything'! 10+++ -Raj Nandy

Skilful use of nature's beauty to describe the growth and development of a child...great write Mamta