Saturday, August 29, 2009

Watching A Butterfly Expire Comments

Rating: 5.0

(This poem is written in villanelle format; aside from that the primary element used if personification. The title is a work in progress; suggestions welcome)

Death is beautiful when it has wings
all dressed in butterfly attire
...
Read full text

COMMENTS
~ Jon London ~ 30 August 2009

Lovely write Pamela, wonderful soft imagery that colours the page with natures natural shades of beauty..............well thought out piece...for your first poem here at PH...I'm impressed.....keep expressing & exploring....you have a gift...Welcome to POEMHUNTER.... :)

0 0 Reply
Pamela Jokerst

Pamela Jokerst

Jacksonville, Florida
Close
Error Success