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Watching in the mellowed light
Through the darkness, through the night
Eyes that pierce and eyes that burn
Eyes that twist and eyes that turn
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Love reading it again and again, imagination....Lurking shadows
As I read the poem, I was forming my own interpretation, which virtually collapsed when I read the notes. I tend to agree with thee uneasy magnetic feelings of Theodora and Hari and experienced something like that myself. Still the images linger in my mind. Very interesting poem
The devil within lurking and watching has been excellently brought out! Lovely, Valerie!
The devil within has a strong presence, he works even one's eyes are opened wide...the beats are perfect...your poems are the best stuff for loud recital! ! !
The title is the simplest one compared to others of yours, but the whole poem is still huge and so beautiful, and it set the title again as the door before a poem reading..lovely! and true_Soul
Haunting, lurking type of poetr at its best Valerie. More please!
Oh my. The master at work. Valerie you are indeed a wonderful poet.
An excellent piece of poetry in content and character. Something or someone is watching us all the time. We have to stay alert and not get tied up. A well penned write. Most appreciative.
Ir starts like a romantic poem but surprisingly moves into some sensational feelings about the 'eye' black like coal' stealing our souls. well-written
A great joy to read, loved this poem! I first thought was the conscience flash light but after reading the comments I realized that it fit better to the challenging technology that we are facing, growing and streghtening its chains around us day by day. Thank you!
I had to read this a couple of times before I twigged on it was about CCTV cameras! Another cracking poem Val.
This is excellent and how far technology has come. Sadly it is needed and privacy barely exists. Thank You
A magnetic moment I passed, when I finished reading this write! Your soul speaks thru your poems.Wonderful Val.
The possessed are to be doomed one day and the miracle of the finest man will happen one day... Excellent poem Valerie.
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7/30/2025 4:46:51 PM # 1.0.0
Brilliant! Another super piece of writing.