Saturday, April 12, 2008

Watchful Robins Comments

Rating: 5.0

The robins adorn the leafless tree
like copper-chested jewels,
keeping close watch,
waiting for sleepless gestures.
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Tara Teeling
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It isn't spring until the first robin sings.Very observent freeform poem.I could really see and hear the robins bobbing along.I await spring, too.A ten from me.

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