Thursday, November 19, 2015

Watch The Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its slow when you wait,
And fast when you are late
Run, Run, no time to walk
Tick-tock goes the clock.
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Bhavya Paranjpe
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Hemanth Madyalkar 28 December 2015

what's the Time: - -12-1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12- - It's slow when you wait and fast when you are Late, I try to follow time very hard though it gives my mind a blast! Elders ever say- Time once gone never returns and leaves you in twist and turns! Wait Wait! I want to tell the clock As though it would really stop, Now there's nothing left to say As I have to rush to the Bus Bay! Now, I realise the importance of it Oh! let me carry my school kit, Now to me it is a crime Not to follow the precious time! ! Written by: Bhavya Paranjpe 14 year old) Daughter of Vinod Paranjpe and Jaya Paranjpe Wonderful Poem, you had missed few last lines so I am posting them here

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Chinedu Dike 19 December 2015

An insightful depiction of the essence of Time - the greatest of all resources. Time waits for no one and once lost could never be regained. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Bhavya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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