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Watch The Sea, My Love Comments

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Watch the sea my love
Remain as long
As you will
But remain long
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 02 June 2016

This poem is similar in impact to the Monsignor poem but in this case there is a deep intimacy running just beneath the narrator's words. Thuis is a breathless moment when the normal running of the world is muted so that we can hear the hearts beating in tandem. You don; t say that directly - it's what I intuit from imagery of a very still night by the sea which almost functions like an enclosure protecting the speaker and his partner. It's a sensuous perception.

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