Watch My Words Comments

Funny idea to go with the visual puns, but I don't think they add anything to the poem as such as the concept of visual confusion isn't carried through into the meaning of the poem. You could use the same device with a topic where identity is more of a theme...and experiment with layouts that build on those collisions. 'Gladly I will pay a huge fine' is a bit of a stretch; -) Fun to be able play and still keep the narrative sensible though! Good job