Monday, October 23, 2017

Wasted Tears Comments

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Is it by Divine grace few pass through life
Eluding pain, with scarce a trace of strife?
While others are slaughtered by Fate's sharp knife,
How the tears fall as misery runs rife!
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Khairul Ahsan 26 October 2017

Your 'Wasted Tears' is a masterpiece I would say, and certainly one of the best of your poems that I've read.The poignant, forlorn tone of the poem has deeply touched me. Every stanza of the poem is shrouded with sadness, has a story to tell. Eloquent conversion of personal pain into beautiful poetry! Very, very well written, simply amazing!

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Jak Black 26 October 2017

Wasted tears, a cry from the heart, A plaintive plea, from one who’s apart from The wicked and woeful, the vicious and vile, Corrosive chameleons with the counterfeit smiles. A well written piece, Lora. I judge this poem to be an expression of personal thoughts and feelings. It's the sort of poem that I'd be proud to have written.

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