Wasted Shadow Comments

I think I've met this shadow or perhaps its cousin.

Dudette, you'll never be used up no matter how much of yourself you pour out! Such is the strength of your spirit. A terrific little write; how did it slip past me? ! Esther : ]

Great little poem, made me smile, especially the last stanza. Was it Peter Pan who was always having troubles with his shadow? Ha, your secret identity is revealed! -chuck

Thats a good line - 'So used up that I dont need a shadow.'

This is an excellent poem, a great deal of sadness flows here. My dear Scarlett, you could never be used up. ---Melvina--

How did I miss this...? Scarlett, your spirit could never be suppressed; your light will overcome every shadow. 'Used up'? As if! ! ! Much love to you, Esther : ]

Staying ahead of your shadow, standing out not blending in, allowing light to enhance you, behold, you'll always win! Scarlett, your poetic voice came through loud and clear, a powerful and eloquent piece. Justine

No Scarlett, you belong out in the light. Wonderful poem. Hugs Anna xxx

Scarlett such a beautiful piece of work it really has so much depth and content, in some parts it was so moving and sad Cheers Rosie

The shadow will part and the light wil burst through Thankyou for this one Love duncan

Absolutely, move on into the noonday sun!

This is great Scarlett. A lovely poem about your shadow, which we all tend to forget we've got, even when the sun comes out. I love your explanation here. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

scarlett...a beautiful sad poem...youth has nothing to do with age...you are as young as your heart/mind is...always ahead of your shadow...a great thought...loved it...nalini

This is a great read, Scarlett. I love the way you have used rage to rid yourself of your demons - the dark shadow of your despair. Good strong write. You tell em kid. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

sometimes you just need to pull yourself together without distraction or negativity. strong work. -Tailor

AWESOME WRITE...YOU GOTTA STAY IN CONTROL OF YOUR OWN DESTINY, & SOMETHING TELLS ME THAT YOU DO THIS OH SO WELL, JUST AS WELL AS THIS POEM LOOKS! '''''''''''''''''''''FJR

This is my favorite part: I am really So used up I don't even need A shadow anymore. Loved it!