Monday, April 15, 2013

Wasted Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

I went for a walk along the beach
Not knowing what I want to reach
Confused heart and mind is all I have.
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Lorcelie A Tenorio
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Chinedu Dike 23 September 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An honest and introspective rendition vivacious with emotions. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2015

Maybe because I am so in love That you are my breath and strength And honey…. you are my life. The love and its struggle and the yearning of the soul and the body you have portrayed very well here in this poem. Thank you very much dear Poetess

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Lorie Tenorio 17 September 2018

Hi Doc, thank you for your comment - it was a feeling from deep within my soul...

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David Wood 15 April 2013

Is any love a wasted love? A lovely poem & good write.

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