Friday, July 6, 2012

Wasted Days Comments

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Wasted Days

There are days when I have no fight left in me,
When I haven't got any energy left,
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Christopher Tye
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Unwritten Soul 05 June 2016

Christopher, i know sometimes we feel like there is nothing in our day and it just like a regular day that passed and another come...but it is not wasted days...i rather say it just incubation time before we finally can see what we wanted to do with our life, and if you want, you can waste no more by creating something new to your coming days. Its never late to do something, it will delay if you not think about it..i understand the poem very well because i was asking the same thing...and i feel like everyday is just a day for sun and night for moon...and i am hanging in between...then we have to do something. Days are passed to us for us to use, or to heal, or to lose...But i know you can make great things if you want, because you have talented hand and mind...what we need to do is use the remaining days and craft the seconds into golden air...to breath inside our lung and heart...nice poem Chris, keep it up Soul

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Neetha Sasidharan 24 July 2012

ha.....ha.... cool and funny poem.....yet so true.....nice idea......nice.., .nice....kp penning...

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Karen Sinclair 06 July 2012

A wasted day to me is nothing of the like...its those moments to recharge your batteries and we all need that. i loved the sound days made as i read it out. they seemed to ring as a gentle reminder of the moments to be considered... wonderful..tyvm karen

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Urshula Davis 06 July 2012

Hummmm and you had to leave us with a question! hahahaha this makes one think and it's so truthful i enjoyed it and loved it! Check out my new poem The Trade

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Christopher Tye

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