Wasted Chance Comments

A universal subject and truth discussed. Simple statements, casual read, clarity of message. The opening, told the poem. An experienced reader need read no further. Perhaps the weakest element. A classic ending, but predicted. This is a well written poem but on a well worn topic. Nothing absent except creativity within the subject matter. A well earned 8. GW62

This always happens to me too. Things just don't turn out the way that you picture they will, and sometimes you get the chance to talk to them for a second time and realise you've wasted it... again. haha : p