Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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My New Legos.
They just keep piling up.
I have so many
That I could build myself a fort.
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Melissa Nikolova
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Paige Nielsen 30 April 2009

Very clever use of metaphor...especially because we don't learn that it is as such till the last line, which makes it, in hindsight, a bit suspenseful. Also, I LOVE LEGOS! ! ! Those Danes and their brightly colored interlinkable toys...

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